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- From: jeff@pro-amber.cts.com (Jeff Jungblut)
- Subject: Re: TECHNICAL: online/on-line
- Organization: ProLine [pro-amber] -- Spring Valley, Ca
- Date: Sat, 7 Nov 92 15:58:40 PST
- Message-ID: <k757576@pro-amber.cts.com>
- In-Reply-To: bjones@lookout.it.uswc.uswest.com (Brent Jones)
- References: <Bx8wCp.2ov@da_vinci.it.uswc.uswest.com>
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- In <Bx8wCp.2ov@da_vinci.it.uswc.uswest.com>
- bjones@lookout.it.uswc.uswest.com (Brent Jones) writes:
-
- >>>> Jeff Jungblut writes:
- >>>>
- >>>> In my own writing, I usually use on-line except when referring to online
- >>>> help, in which case I spell it as one word.
-
- >>Considering I'm also usually the editor, it stays as I wrote it. (In the
- >>case of online vs on-line vs on line, at least.)
- >
- >I'm not sure what you mean here. You say you usually use "on-line"
- >unless you are referring to "online help." Do you mean that you would
- >write "on-line information" and "on-line access" but would write "online
- >help"? As all of these strings have essentially the same grammatical
- >structure, I'm not sure how you would justify the inconsistent
- >usage. Using "on-line" after the modified word in the sentence would
- >also fly in the face of convention--most sources would recommend "on
- >line." You would hyphenate the compound modifier if the reader is likely to
- >momentarily read the first part of the compound, "on," as an adjective,
- >which I don't think is true in this particular case. A sample sentence
- >would be, "The help screens are on line."
- >
- >Just curious. Conventions are conventions, and not altars to worship at
- >(at which to worship? :-)), but they should probably be logical and
- >internally consistent. This is especially true in technical
- >documentation.
-
- I'm not consistent in that respect. Here are some examples of how I use it:
-
- "Make sure the printer is on line and selected."
- "Press Command-? for online help."
- "You use a modem for on-line communications with a remote computer."
-
- My exception to the rule is "online help". The only reason I do this is
- because I've seen "online help" spelled this way in most documentation and
- magazine articles, so that's my argument for consistency. According to the
- rules, it should be "on-line", not "online".
-