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- From: Crawford_Kilian@mindlink.bc.ca (Crawford Kilian)
- Subject: Fiction Advice 13: Characters
- Organization: MIND LINK! - British Columbia, Canada
- Date: Fri, 6 Nov 1992 04:30:49 GMT
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- Character In Fiction
-
- Plausible, complex characters are crucial to successful storytelling. You can
- develop them in several ways.
-
- 1. Concreteness. They have specific homes, possessions, medical histories,
- tastes in furniture, political opinions. Apart from creating verisimilitude,
- these concrete aspects of the characters should convey information about the
- story: does the hero smoke Marlboros because he's a rugged outdoorsman, or
- because that's the brand smoked by men of his social background, or just
- because you do?
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- 2. Symbolic association. You can express a character's nature metaphorically
- through objects or settings (a rusty sword, an apple orchard in bloom, a
- violent thunderstorm). These may not be perfectly understandable to the
- reader at first (or to the writer!), but they seem subconsciously right.
- Symbolic associations can be consciously "archetypal" (see Northrop Frye),
- linking the character to similar characters in literature. Or you may use
- symbols in some private system which the reader may or may not consciously
- grasp. Characters' names can form symbolic associations, though this practice
- has become less popular in modern fiction except in comic or ironic writing.
-
- 3. Speech. The character's speech (both content and manner) helps to evoke
- personality: shy and reticent, aggressive and frank, coy, humorous. Both
- content and manner of speech should accurately reflect the character's social
- and ethnic background without stereotyping. If a character "speaks prose,"
- his or her background should justify that rather artificial manner. If a
- character is inarticulate, that in itself should convey something.
-
- 4. Behavior. From table manners to performance in hand-to-hand combat, each
- new example of behavior should be consistent with what we already know of the
- character, yet it should reveal some new aspect of personality. Behavior
- under different forms of stress should be especially revealing.
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- 5. Motivation. The characters should have good and sufficient reasons for
- their actions, and should carry those actions out with plausible skills. If
- we don't believe characters would do what the author tells us they do, the
- story fails.
-
- 6. Change. Characters should respond to their experiences by changing--or by
- working hard to *avoid* changing. As they seek to carry out their agendas,
- run into conflicts, fail or succeed, and confront new problems, they will not
- stay the same people. If a character seems the same at the end of a story as
- at the beginning, the reader at least should be changed and be aware of
- whatever factors kept the character from growing and developing.
-
- The Character Resume
- One useful way to learn more about your characters is to fill out a "resume"
- for them--at least for the more important ones. Such a resume might include
- the following information:
-
- Name:
- Address & Phone Number:
- Date & Place of Birth:
- Height/Weight/Physical Description:
- Citizenship/Ethnic Origin:
- Parents' Names & Occupations:
- Other Family Members:
- Spouse or Lover:
- Friends' Names & Occupations:
- Social Class:
- Education:
- Occupation/Employer:
- Social Class:
- Salary:
- Community Status:
- Job-Related Skills:
- Political Beliefs/Affiliations:
- Hobbies/Recreations:
- Personal Qualities (imagination, taste, etc.):
- Ambitions:
- Fears/Anxieties/Hangups:
- Intelligence:
- Sense of Humor:
- Most Painful Setback/Disappointment:
- Most Instructive/Meaningful Experience:
- Health/Physical Condition/Distinguishing Marks/Disabilities:
- Sexual Orientation/Experience/Values:
- Tastes in food, drink, art, music, literature, decor, clothing:
- Attitude toward Life:
- Attitude toward Death:
- Philosophy of Life (in a phrase):
-
- You may not use all this information, and you may want to add categories of
- your own, but a resume certainly helps make your character come alive in your
- own mind. The resume can also give you helpful ideas on everything from
- explaining the character's motivation to conceiving dramatic incidents that
- demonstrates the character's personal traits. The resume serves a useful
- purpose in your project bible, reminding you of the countless details you
- need to keep straight.
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