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- Computer underground Digest Sun Sep 11, 1994 Volume 6 : Issue 80
- ISSN 1004-042X
-
- Editors: Jim Thomas and Gordon Meyer (TK0JUT2@NIU.BITNET)
- Archivist: Brendan Kehoe
- Retiring Shadow Archivist: Stanton McCandlish
- Shadow-Archivists: Dan Carosone / Paul Southworth
- Ralph Sims / Jyrki Kuoppala
- Ian Dickinson
- Urban Legend Editor: E. Greg Shrdlugold
-
- CONTENTS, #6.80 (Sun, Sep 11, 1994)
-
- File 1--Exon Amendment text
- File 2--Turing Test
- File 3-- Musicians of the World, Unite! (eye Reprint)
- File 4--The Process of Writing a Cybercolumn (Robert Rossney Reprint)
- File 5--Cu Digest Header Information (unchanged since 09-11-94)
-
- CuD ADMINISTRATIVE, EDITORIAL, AND SUBSCRIPTION INFORMATION APPEARS IN
- THE CONCLUDING FILE AT THE END OF EACH ISSUE.
-
- ----------------------------------------------------------------------
-
- Date: 9 Sep 1994 12:29:26 -0500
- From: sbarber@panix.com (Steve Barber)
- Subject: File 1--Exon Amendment text
-
- ((Here is the text of the Exon "Communications Decency" amendment to
- the Communications Act of 1994 (S. 1822) currently winding its way
- through Congress. Whether you think its effects would be good or bad,
- it's worth getting familiar with what the text actually says.
-
- Included here is the amendment text, Sen. Exon's introductory speech,
- and an article placed in the Cong. Record to bolster his position.
-
- -Steve Barber))
-
-
- CONGRESSIONAL RECORD -- Senate
-
- Tuesday, July 26, 1994
-
- (Legislative day of Wednesday, July 20, 1994)
-
- 103rd Congress 2nd Session
-
-
-
- 140 Cong Rec S 9745
-
-
-
- REFERENCE: Vol. 140 No. 99
- TITLE: COMMUNICATIONS ACT OF 1994
-
- EXON AMENDMENT NO. 2404
- SPEAKER: MR. EXON
-
- (Ordered referred to the Committee on Commerce. )
-
-
- Mr. EXON submitted an amendment intended to be proposed by
- him to the bill (S. 1822) to foster the further development of the
- Nation's telecommunications infrastructure and protection of the
- public interest, and for other purposes; as follows:
-
- On page 104, below line 12, add the following:
-
- TITLE VIII-OBSCENE, HARASSING, AND WRONGFUL UTILIZATION OF
- TELECOMMUNICATIONS FACILITIES
-
- SEC. 801. OBSCENE OR HARASSING USE OF TELECOMMUNICATIONS
- FACILITIES UNDER THE COMMUNICATIONS ACT OF 1934.
-
- (a) Expansion of Offenses. -Section 223 of the Communications
- Act of 1934 (47 U.S.C. 223) is amended-
-
- (1) in subsection (a)(1)-
-
- (A) by striking out "telephone" in the matter above
- subparagraph (A) and inserting in lieu thereof
- "telecommunications device";
-
- (B) by striking out "makes any comment, request, suggestion
- or proposal" in subparagraph (A) and inserting in lieu thereof
- "makes, transmits, or otherwise makes available any comment,
- request, suggestion, proposal, image, or other communication;
-
- (C) by striking out subparagraph (B) and inserting in lieu
- thereof the following new subparagraph (B):
-
-
- "(B) makes a telephone call or utilizes a telecommunications
- device, whether or not conversation or communication ensues,
- without disclosing his identity and with intent to annoy, abuse,
- threaten, or harass any person at the called number or who receives
- the communication;" and
-
- (D) by striking out subparagraph (D) and inserting in lieu
- thereof the following new subparagraph (D):
-
- "(D) makes repeated telephone calls or repeatedly initiates
- communication with a telecommunications device, during which
- conversation or communication ensues, solely to harass any person
- at the called number or who receives the communication,";
-
- (2) in subsection (a)(2), by striking out "telephone facility"
- and inserting in lieu thereof "telecommunications facility";
-
- (3) in subsection (b)(1)-
-
- (A) in subparagraph (A)-
-
- (i) by striking out "telephone," and inserting in lieu thereof
-
- "telecommunications device,"; and
-
- (ii) by inserting "or initiated the communication" after
- "placed the call"; and
-
- (B) in subparagraph (B), by striking out "telephone facility"
- and inserting in lieu thereof "telecommunications facility"; and
-
- (4) in subsection (b)(2)-
-
- (A) in subparagraph (A)-
-
- (i) by striking out "by means of telephone, makes" and inserting
- in lieu thereof "by means of telephone or telecommunications
- device, makes, transmits, or makes available"; and
-
- (ii) by inserting "or initiated the communication" after
- "placed the call"; and
-
- (B) in subparagraph (B), by striking out "telephone facility"
- and inserting in lieu thereof "telecommunications facility".
-
- (b) Expansion of Penalties. -Such section, as amended by
- subsection (a) of this section, is further amended-
-
- (1) by striking out "$ 50,000'' each place it appears and
- inserting in lieu thereof "$ 100,000'' and
-
- (2) by striking out "six months" each place it appears and
- inserting in lieu thereof "2 years".
-
- (c) Prohibition on Provision of Access. -Subsection (c)(1)
- of such action is amended by striking out "telephone" and inserting
- in lieu thereof "telecommunications device".
-
- (d) Conforming Amendment. -The section head of such section is
- amended to read as follows:
-
- "OBSCENE OR HARASSING UTILIZATION OF TELECOMMUNICATIONS
- DEVICES AND FACILITIES IN THE DISTRICT OF COLUMBIA OR IN
- INTERSTATE OR FOREIGN COMMUNICATIONS".
-
- SEC. 802. OBSCENE PROGRAMMING ON CABLE TELEVISION.
-
- Section 639 of the Communications Act of 1943 (47 U.S.C. 559)
- is amended by striking out "$ 10,000'' and inserting in lieu
- thereof "$ 100,000''.
-
- SEC. 803. BROADCASTING OBSCENE OF LANGUAGE ON RADIO.
-
- Section 1464 of title 18, United States Code, is amended by
- striking out "$ 10,000'' and inserting in lieu thereof "$ 100,000''.
-
- SEC. 804. INTERCEPTION AND DISCLOSURE OF ELECTRONIC
- COMMUNICATIONS.
-
- Section 2511 of title 18, United States Code, is amended-
-
- (1) in paragraph (1)-
-
- (A) by striking out "wire, oral, or electronic communication"
- each place it appears and inserting in lieu thereof "wire, oral,
- electronic, or digital communication"; and
-
- (B) in the matter designated as item (b), by striking out
- "oral communication" in the matter above clause (i) and inserting
- in lieu thereof "communication"; and
-
- (2) in paragraph (2)(a), by striking out "wire or electronic
- communication service" each place it appears (other than in the
- second sentence) and inserting in lieu thereof "wire, electronic,
- or digital communication service".
-
- SEC. 805. ADDITIONAL PROHIBITION ON BILLING FOR TOLL-FREE
- TELEPHONE CALLS.
-
- Section 228(c)(6) of the Communications Act of 1934
- (47 U.S.C. 228(c)(6)) is amended-
-
- (1) by striking out "or" at the end of subparagraph (C);
-
- (2) by striking out the period at the end of subparagraph (D)
- and inserting in lieu thereof "; or"; and
-
- (3) by adding at the end thereof the following:
-
- "(E) the calling party being assessed, by virtue of being asked
- to connect or otherwise transfer to a pay-per-call service, a charge
- for the call.".
-
- SEC. 806. SCRAMBLING OF CABLE CHANNELS FOR NONSUBSCRIBERS.
-
- Part IV of title VI of the Communications Act of 1934 (47 U.S.C.
- 551 et seq.,) is amended by adding at the end the following:
-
- "SEC. 640. SCRAMBLING OF CABLE CHANNELS FOR NONSUBSCRIBERS.
-
- "(a) Requirement. -In providing video programming unsuitable
- for children to any subscriber through a cable system, a cable
- operator shall fully scramble the video and audio portion of each
- channel such programming that the subscriber does not subscribe it.
-
- "(b) Definition. -In this section the term 'to scramble', in
- the case of any video programming, means to rearrange the content of
- the signal of the programming so that the programming cannot be
- apprehended by persons unauthorized to apprehend the programming.".
-
- Mr. EXON. Mr. President, I rise to file an amendment to S. 1822,
- the Communications Act of 1994. I expect the Senate Commerce
- Committee to take this legislation up next week. I intend to
- offer this amendment at that time.
-
- Simply put, this Communications Decency amendment modernizes
- the anti-harassment, decency, and anti-obscenity provisions of the
- Communications Act of 1934. When these provisions were originally
- drafted, they were couched in the context of telephone technology.
- These critical public protections must be updated for the digital
- world of the future.
-
- Before too long a host of new telecommunications devices will be
- used by citizens to communicate with each other. Telephones may one
- day be relegated to museums next to telegraphs. Conversation is being
- replaced with communication and electrical transmissions are being
- replaced with digital transmissions. As the Congress rewrites the
- Communications Act, it is necessary and appropriate to update these
- important public protections.
-
- Anticipating this exciting future of communications, the
- Communications Decency amendment I introduce today will keep
- pace with the coming change.
-
- References to telephones in the current law are replaced with
- references to telecommunications device. The amendment also increases
- the maximum penalties connected with the decency provisions of the
- Communications Act to $ 100,000 and 2 years imprisonment. The
- provision requires cable providers of adult pay-per-view programming
- to fully scramble the audio and video portions of the programming to
- homes which do not subscribe to the particular program.
-
- Unsuspecting families should not be assaulted with audio of
- indecent programming or partially scrambled video. The amendment
- also prevents individuals and companies engaged in the pay-per-call
- services from by-passing number blocking by connecting individuals
- to pay-per-call services via a toll-free number.
-
- These measures will help assure that the information
- superhighway does not turn into a red light district. It will help
- protect children from being exposed to obscene, lewd, or indecent
- messages.
-
- This legislation also protects against harassment. Recent
- reports of electronic stalking by individuals who use computer
- communications to leave threatening and harassing messages sent
- chills through the users of new technologies. Recent stories about
- the misuse of the internet and 800 numbers also demand action.
- I ask that two stories related to the misuse of the information
- technologies be included at the end of my remarks as illustrations
- of the type of activities this amendment attempts to address.
-
- Mr. President, I ask unanimous consent that an article be
- printed in the Record.
-
-
- There being no objection, the material was ordered to be printed
- in the Record, as follows:
-
- ((Los Angeles Times and other articles deleted))
-
- ------------------------------
-
- Date: Thu, 8 Sep 1994 00:10:27 -0700 (PDT)
- From: Robert Epstein <repstein@NUNIC.NU.EDU>
- Subject: File 2--Turing Test
-
- For Immediate Release September 1, 1994
-
- INTERNATIONAL QUEST FOR THINKING COMPUTER
- TO BE HELD IN SAN DIEGO
- (Human vs. Computers on December 16th)
-
- In the very near future, many believe that human beings will be
- joined by an equally intelligent species -- computers so smart that they
- can truly think, converse, and perhaps even feel.
-
- To expedite the search for this new species, the fourth annual
- Loebner Prize Competition in Artificial Intelligence will be held at
- the new San Marcos campus of California State University on Friday,
- December 16th, 1994. The Loebner Prize pits humans against
- computers in what the Wall Street Journal described as "a groundbreaking
- battle." The first three competitions drew national and international
- media coverage.
-
- In the event, human judges converse at computer terminals and
- attempt to determine which terminals are controlled by fellow humans and
- which by computers. For the 1994 competition, conversation will be
- restricted to certain topics. This year, as in 1993, all judges will be
- members of the national press. The 1993 judges represented TIME
- Magazine, Popular Science, PBS, the Voice of America, and elsewhere. The
- contest has drawn media attention around the world, including coverage on
- CNN television, PBS television, the New York Times (front page), the
- Washington Post, the London Guardian, The Economist, the San Diego Union
- Tribune (front page), Science News, and many periodicals in the computer
- field, including Computerworld and AI Magazine (cover story).
-
- "Surprisingly, in early competitions, some of the computers fooled
- some of the judges into thinking they were people," said Dr. Robert
- Epstein, Research Professor at National University, Director Emeritus of
- the Cambridge Center for Behavioral Studies, and the organizer and
- director of the three previous contests.
-
- The author of the winning software of this year's event will receive
- $2,000 and a bronze medal. In 1995, Epstein said, the first open-ended
- contest -- one with no topic restrictions -- will be conducted. When a
- computer can pass an unrestricted test, the grand prize of $100,000 will
- be awarded, and the contest will be discontinued.
-
- The competition is named after benefactor Dr. Hugh G. Loebner of New
- York City and was inspired by computer pioneer Alan Turing, who in 1950
- proposed a test like the Loebner contest as a way to answer the question:
- Can computers think?
-
- Transcripts of conversations during the first three competitions are
- available from the Cambridge Center for Behavioral Studies (telephone
- 617-491-9020). Diskettes that will play back the conversations in real
- time may also be purchased.
-
- A partial list of sponsors of previous competitions includes: Apple
- Computers, Computerland, Crown Industries, GDE Systems, IBM Personal
- Computer Company's Center for Natural Computing, Greenwich Capital
- Markets, Motorola, the National Science Foundation, The Alfred P. Sloan
- Foundation, and The Weingart Foundation.
-
- Application guidelines: Official rules and an application may be
- obtained by contacting Dr. Robert Epstein, Contest Director, 933
- Woodlake Drive, Cardiff by the Sea, CA 92007-1009 Tel: 619-436-4400
- Fax: 619-436-4490 Internet: repstein@nunic.nu.edu * The deadline for
- receipt of applications is November 1, 1994. * Applications must be
- accompanied by printed protocols recording actual interaction between the
- system to be entered and one or more humans. The protocols may not
- exceed ten double-spaced pages. * Applications must specify a single
- domain of discourse in which the computer system is proficient. The
- domain must be expressed by an English phrase containing no more than
- five words. * Each entry must communicate using approximations of
- natural English, and it must be prepared to communicate for an indefinite
- period of time. * Computer entries may contain standard or customized
- hardware and software. The hardware may be of any type as long as it is
- inorganic and as long as its replies are not controlled by humans
- responding in real time to the judges' inputs. * Entrants must be
- prepared to interface their systems to standard computer terminals over
- telephone lines at 2400 baud. * The prize will be awarded if there is
- at least one entry.
-
- Advance notice of new guidelines for 1995: The 1995 event will be
- an unrestricted Turing Test, requiring computer entries to be able to
- converse for an indefinite period of time with no topic restrictions. In
- 1995, entries may be required to run on hardware located at the
- competition site.
-
- For further information: Complete transcripts and IBM-compatible
- diskettes that play the 1991, 1992, and 1993 conversations in real-time
- are available for purchase from the Cambridge Center for Behavioral
- Studies (tel: 617-491-9020). Sponsorship opportunities are available.
- ************************
- CONTACTS:
-
- Dr. Robert Epstein
- Contest Director
- 619-436-4400 (fax 4490)
- repstein@nunic.nu.edu
-
- Dr. Hugh G. Loebner
- Prize Donor
- 201-672-2277 (fax 7536)
- loebner@acm.org
-
- ------------------------------
-
- Date: Fri, 2 Sep 1994 11:07:39 -0400 (EDT)
- From: eye WEEKLY <eye@IO.ORG>
- Subject: File 3-- Musicians of the World, Unite! (eye Reprint)
-
- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
- eye WEEKLY August 11 1994
- Toronto's arts newspaper .....free every Thursday
- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
- EYE NET EYE NET
-
- MUSICIANS OF THE WORLD, UNITE!
- You have nothing to lose but your labels
-
- by
- K.K. CAMPBELL
-
-
- Back in May, eye Net reported how Burlington band The Banned
- uploaded their single, "Karla And Paul," to cyberspace. The song,
- about Homolka's deal-making with the Crown, was refused airplay by
- radio stations. Screw them. Get it from the net. Judge for yourself.
-
- In July, Aerosmith's label Geffen decided to emulate groups like The
- Banned. Aerosmith's tune "Head First" was made available on
- CompuServe for one week. A hefty bugger of a file, almost 5 megs
- zipped.
-
- "Head First" is no longer available through CompuServe, but it can
- be found in eye's music directory -- gopher.io.org or www.io.org/eye.
- (You'll also find The Banned and a couple of local bands there. More
- to come. To store your songs/samples/bios, write eye@io.org or call
- 971-6776 x.311.)
-
- "Head First" was recorded at an unnecessarily high quality -- 22
- KHz (44KHz being "CD-quality"). Most songs on the net are recorded
- at 8/11 KHz -- tinny AM radio quality, good enough to judge a band,
- shit for regular listening. The idea: if a person likes your sound, they
- fork over the bucks for a good copy.
-
- "I guess this scares record labels -- music getting to people
- immediately, without the clutter of marketing machinery, hype and
- demographic reports," Arizona's Keith Kehrer (kamakaze@ramp.com)
- told eye -- email him for info on the MusicLink Musicians Network.
- Kehrer even envisions "online recording studios."
-
- Tyson Macaulay (ah044@freenet.carleton.ca) is setting up an indie
- net.distribution service in Ottawa, with Shake Records. Macaulay
- helped bring the federal industry ministry online. "This could
- completely revolutionize the music industry," he agrees. "No more
- signing your life away to a major label to get distribution. If the net
- keeps growing the way it is, a local band can get worldwide
- distribution. Small bands with small budgets can do big things."
-
- Denis McGrath, segment producer with CITY-TV's MediaTelevision
- (mediatv@mail.north.net), says most record company people are
- "blissfully unaware what's happening; and those that know are so
- scared they don't want to delve into it any further." They placate
- themselves with irrational assurances the net is a fad, or digital
- computer files that decrease in quality when re-transmitted.
-
- James Macfarlane (digitar@io.org), columnist for The Computer
- Paper, agrees the music industry is due for a shake-up, but so are all
- consumer products, not just music. "Direct from manufacturer to
- consumer. Down the road, there'll be no retail level as we understand
- it."
-
- Debbie Rix, publicity/promo honcho with MCA Concerts Canada,
- agrees the industry is nervous about what Geffen did. "Music
- companies have one salable item: music. Everything else is given
- away pretty much free: videos, in-store appearances, bios, photos,
- etc. If songs are given away free, what's left?"
-
- But Rix predicts people will not send money to small online
- distributors once a few charlatans spoil the party. Right now, it's
- 1967 and the Summer of Love. How long before scammers move in
- and paranoia kills the scene?
-
- BREAK THE MARCONI LOCK
-
- The net may also help snap the stultifying Marconi Lock, what
- McGrath calls the "Eric Clapton-Mariah Carey-Phil Collins-Michael
- Bolton-Unholy Alliance" that lords over radio.
-
- Rix agrees, to a point. "Look at Canadian radio: lots of talk, lots of
- classic rock. Try getting the Dayglo Abortions played."
-
- Which is why many people instinctively recoil from major-label
- hype. I liked Nirvana when first hearing Bleach on CKLN's Aggressive
- Rock. When they were picked up and subjected to ram-it-down-
- their-throat promotional blasts, I simply stopped listening. Some
- argue this is silly -- you like the music or don't. Bullshit. Rejecting
- hype is a healthy defence mechanism. Without it, you're a hopeless
- dupe.
-
- And that's the appeal of the net -- lateral cross-pollination,
- circumvention of verticalized/monopolized sound. I'm not alone. TV
- ratings fall while Internet connectivity soars.
-
- HOLY TRINITY
-
- Last week, eye Net mentioned news media's Holy Trinity of instant
- net coverage: pedophilia, piracy and pornography. As the net offers
- opportunity for unauthorized transmission of music files, Jim
- Carroll (jcarroll@jacc.com), co-author of the bestselling Canadian
- Internet Handbook, agrees net.cops could result from an industry-fed
- anti-piracy media barrage. But so what?
-
- "Face it, the technology is outstripping the ability for anyone to deal
- with it. It defeats centralized control structures. What's to prevent
- me from being a smart hacker and taking a CD-ROM that plays music,
- copying the digital bits to hard drive, then uploading them
- somewhere?" Business Week recently did an article predicting
- Canadians should have the equivalent of 64-gig chips by 2010 --
- compared to the 4-meg average now. "You should be able to load the
- entire Aerosmith discography into computer memory with that,"
- Carroll grins. Speedier lines will decrease transmission time
- exponentially.
-
- McGrath thinks the music industry might engage in backroom
- jockeying to kill the medium, like it did digital audio tape (DAT).
- Right now, there are a lot of steps in using the net.
-
- Mass popularity requires a handy, inexpensive device that does it all
- automatically for the consumer, McGrath says then writes the
- digital file to a playback medium, like CD. "The music industry might
- very well be in a position to stall or even stop the production of just
- this device -- like DAT."
-
- McGrath says music companies have another motive to kill pure
- digital distribution, =85 la the net. "Without physical distribution of
- CDs, consumers will ask: how come producing a CD costs $2 yet sells
- for $16? It's common knowledge a CD is now cheaper to make than
- vinyl was. Right there, alone, record companies are in real trouble."
-
-
- ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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- Mailing list available http://www.io.org/eye
- eye@io.org "Break the Gutenberg Lock..." 416-971-8421
-
- ------------------------------
-
- Date: Fri, 9 Sep 1994 01:07:01 PDT
- From: CuD Moderators <cudigest@mindvox.phantom.com>
- Subject: File 4--The Process of Writing a Cybercolumn (Robert Rossney Reprint)
-
- ((MODERATORS' NOTE: In CuD 6.79, we wrote of a cyber-death watch (in
- The Well's News conference, topic 1581), which included summaries of
- two media stories of the event. We suggested that the media missed
- the real story. One media piece, a column by Robert Rossney, which
- appeared in the San Francisco Chronicle, also drew some criticism on
- The Well. In response, Rossney wrote a description of the genesis of
- his column, explaining the process by which an event is framed and how
- editorial and other constraints shape the final product.
-
- As critics of much of the media depiction of cyberspace, we often
- comment unfavorably on much that appears in the media. Some
- commentators are hopelessly uninformed, others opt for shameless
- sensationalism, and a few are competent writers who usually do a
- decent job in spite of the requisites of their medium that influence
- what ultimately appears in print. Rossney's commentary reminds us that
- even experienced writers are not always able to frame stories as they
- wish, and that the writing process requires a number of personal
- choices and confrontation of a variety of administrative obstacles (as
- his summary of the rejection of a proposed story on CuD archivist
- Brendan Kehoe illustrates). The following reminds us that writing is
- damned hard work, especially for conveying the complexities of
- cyberspace to a general audience. The post originally appeared
- on The Well in Media/833)).
-
- ==========
-
- Let me tell you all how this column came about. If you're already bored
- with this topic, don't read this response; you'll be REALLY bored by the
- time you get to the end.
-
- * * *
-
- One of the things that I am trying to do in my column is to cover what
- goes on online as though the online world were an actual society with
- an actual culture. A society full of real people having real experiences,
- even if they share those experiences through the written word.
-
- In particular, I want to illuminate something for those readers who are NOT
- online: however technogeeky and insubstantial and weird the world they
- might have heard about from less brilliant and informed sources than little
- me, it is, nonetheless, vital and human.
-
- I thought this story fit in to these broader objectives pretty well. Here
- we have a pivotal life event -- the leaving of it -- and it's causing
- ripples to travel through this new and strange context. What happened
- in news 1581 struck me then, and strikes me still, as a perfect example
- of the making-it-up-as-we-go-along quality, the dreaded "co-creation,"
- that has made the online world such an exciting and fascinating place
- to hang over the last dozen or so years.
-
- The keyword here is ONLINE. It may have escaped notice in all the hooraw
- here, but that's the name of the column. I write about stuff that happens
- ONLINE. That's my mandate. Keep this in mind; it will be important
- later on.
-
- * * *
-
- Now, I had a political problem to struggle with. About six months ago,
- I wrote a piece about Brendan Kehoe. I thought it was remarkable and
- touching that you could find the story of his catastrophic accident
- everywhere on the net, and that his coworkers had set up a .plan for
- people to finger so that they could track changes in his condition.
-
- My editor killed it. Said it was "too depressing."
-
- Well, here I had another story that I really wanted to cover, only it was
- about something even more depressing, something that ended with an actual
- dead person at the end. Plus it happened on the WELL. I try very hard to
- avoid writing about the WELL too much; it would be easy to slip into
- omphaloskepsis and end up being boring and parochial.
-
- All of that was true, but the story I was watching happen was, from the
- perspective that I described above, too good to pass up.
-
- Fortunately, the WELL is famous at the moment. A piece in the Washington
- Post, a blurb in Time magazine, and now I had something that outweighed
- the depression quotient, as far as the people standing between me and
- the newspaper were concerned: a breaking story that had been covered by
- someone else. It was this that gave me the handle to get it into the
- paper.
-
- * * *
-
- At this point, I had two other problems to deal with. The first was that
- the obvious way to write this piece was dead wrong. The obvious way is
- the inspirational and uplifting story of the good people that all pulled
- together and supported kj, each in his or her way, in her final days.
- A COMMUNITY RALLIES IN THE FACE OF DEATH.
-
- There were at least four things wrong with this angle.
-
- First, it wasn't the whole story. There were MANY other currents going
- on besides that one: there was the flaming, and the blank postings, and
- the poetry, and all the other things that people were doing that had
- nothing at all to do with bringing aid and comfort to a dying woman.
-
- Second, it wasn't what was happening online. What people that followed
- this story online saw was how the direct, physical, offline community
- response, the one that actually meant something to kj, was described
- after the fact by tigereye and ralf and others. The act of going to
- someone's deathbed and offering aid and comfort is one thing; the act
- of coming back from someone's deathbed and bearing witness is another.
- It was the latter act that was occurring online. This is a troublesome
- distinction, and I'll revisit it in a bit.
-
- The third problem with writing that story is that it could not help but
- sentimentalize kj. Now, kj and I loathed one another. I thought she was
- unprincipled on her good days and batshit crazy on her bad ones. I don't
- know exactly what she thought of me, but I'd bet folding money it wasn't
- good.
-
- Nonetheless, however much I disliked kj, I didn't dislike her enough to
- write a warm piece about the glowing positive energy that coalesced about
- her in her final days. I found the idea distasteful, and I bet she would
- have too. Whatever else I can say about her, she was about the most
- fundamentally unsentimental person I ever met. I wasn't going to dishonor
- that.
-
- The fourth problem is that such a piece would be predictable and boring.
-
- * * *
-
- The approach I adopted instead was doomed from the start: ethnography.
- Take a complex society and pull apart one of its rituals, examining how
- the different consituents of the society participate in it and respond to
- one another. The traditional ethnographic essay, like, say, Clifford
- Geertz's "Deep Play: Notes on the Balinese Cockfight" or "Thick Descrip-
- tion," is about forty pages long. I had eight hundred words. Also, I
- am not Clifford Geertz.
-
- Nonetheless, it's a way of thinking that I'm comfortable with, and so I
- set to work. I discarded obvious aberrations, like <xxxxx>'s appalling
- response. (If you're looking for something in that topic that I actually
- disapproved of, that's it.)
-
- I read through the topic three or four times, cataloguing the major
- divisions that the responses seemed to fall into. I came up with ways
- to characterize these divisions that I thought would make sense to the
- readers. (Remember them?) And I decided that, in accordance with the
- kind of analysis that I was trying to do, I needed to adopt a detached
- tone.
-
- When I was done with this, I sat back to figure out what I thought about
- the whole thing. There were a couple of ideas that I explored and then
- abandoned.
-
- One was the idea that kj was, essentially, a placeholder for the
- proceedings.
-
- This wasn't at all true for what was going on offline, and it wasn't
- completely true for what was going on online either, but there was
- substance to the idea nonetheless: it was very clear to me that many
- of the people who were responding -- and, I guessed, the vast majority of
- those who were reading -- had only the vaguest idea who kj was.
- It could have been me, or you, who was dying, and while the topic would
- be completely different it would still have a lot of people in it who
- posted "I didn't know rbr, but I find this incredibly moving."
-
- I didn't like this idea because there were many, many counterexamples, and
- the counterexamples were some of the most interesting and affecting stuff
- that was happening in the topic. So I dropped it.
-
- Another idea that I rejected was the notion that there was a lot of
- grandstanding going on. This had been my impression the first time through
- the topic. I felt that here was a place where people came to talk about
- their feelings, and that the will to attention that drives most of us to
- post led people to rage against the dying of the light a little too loudly
- and too long. It seemed to me that people were preening their sensitivity.
-
- But on rereading the topic the three or four times I did, I found that
- this idea just didn't hold up. Read carefully, the topic looked much
- less facile than it had when I was skimming over the new postings every
- day. Even the strange sunflower thread, which I had thought was pretty
- ridiculous the first time through, proved to have a great deal more integ-
- rity than I had originally thought.
-
- * * *
-
- The only idea that I came up with that seemed to be solid came out of
- the fact that there were so many different kinds of responses to kj's
- dying.
-
- Some, like the blank postings, were all but totally opaque. There was
- selflessness to be found, and self-centeredness. There was a certain
- amount of shock and despair. There were people who were inarticulate and
- people who were glib.
-
- This was, essentially, much like any other topic online: full of the chaos
- that attends a group of independent minds who are far from unanimity. And
- it was a topic that didn't have the we've-all-done-this-before character
- that many topics that we see tend to develop.
-
- Because we HAVEN'T all done this before. Only three WELL users have made
- their deaths known to the WELL over the last ten years. This is a new
- world for us here. We haven't yet developed the language that we'll be
- using when it happens for the tenth or twentieth time. We're still
- figuring out what to say. No clear picture of the right way to respond
- emerged from this topic.
-
- So that was my handle for the column: bewilderment.
-
- And at this point, I think you can see how it goes together and why.
- Graf 1: the note that convinces my editor not to kill it. Grafs 2-4:
- Americans aren't good at dealing with death. Everything up to the
- conclusion: here's the story, emphasis on the contradictory ways
- that people online are learning to deal with death. Conclusion: this
- kind of response is new right now, but ten years from now as people
- develop more familiarity with it we will see traditions emerge.
-
- There was some careless stuff in there that I regret. I wish I'd gotten
- the numbers right; that was just dumb. The bit about "stammering inco-
- herently in the face of the void" is cute, but it was dumb too. I could
- have avoided using "peculiar" twice. But really, I've done lots worse,
- and I don't know any columnist who hasn't.
-
- * * *
-
- Now, for the last week I've had to listen to a lot of remarkable stuff.
-
- (Not all of it came from people who disagreed with me, either. A number
- of comments, like chuck's and humdog's, were, while supportive, utterly
- baffling to me. I still can't see how someone can read this column and
- come away from it with a sense of who kj was, except insofar as the
- column is unsentimental and so was she. It wasn't *about* kj.)
-
- Mostly, the negative response here just makes me uncomfortable. Not that
- people would disagree with Lofty Me, but that people could find something
- to disagree with in a column so utterly flensed of actual opinion. By the
- time I was done with this column, about the only opinion that I still had
- about news 1581 was that xxxxx's response was really creepy. (And it
- really is. "I'm so sorry you're dying, you're one of the few people that
- backs me up." There's a fucking comfort to the afflicted for you.)
-
- Most of tigereye's ire, I think, comes from a fundamental difference of
- perspective. Her interest lies, as it ought to, with the dozens of people
- who provided aid and comfort to kj, and she's concerned that their story
- not be shortchanged. I don't disagree with that.
-
- But I was telling a different story. My story was about what happened
- online. That's my *job*.
-
- The grim truth is that the only reason kj's death appeared in the paper
- at all is the online developments that accompanied it. I think that's
- pretty stark, and if kj had been my friend it would make me bitter,
- but it's true. The REAL story, the one that was happening in real life
- 24 hours a day and not just when the reporters were logged in, that story
- never saw print, and probably never will.
-
- From my perspective as a cog in the media machine, I'm standing pretty
- firm. I had good reasons for choosing this story in the first place,
- good reasons for taking the approach to it that I did, I described what I
- saw accurately and fairly, and I drew my audience towards an overall
- sensibility that I think is good for us all. Apart from one factual
- inaccuracy, and a certain walking-on-eggshells tone that I couldn't get
- rid of, I'm not unhappy with it.
-
- I sure am tired of hearing about it, though.
-
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