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- From: dsals@vms.macc.wisc.edu (David Sals)
- Subject: Re: Switch in p.o.v./time period
- Message-ID: <1992Jul21.192512.13466@macc.wisc.edu>
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- Organization: University of Wisconsin Academic Computing Center
- Date: 21 JUL 92 14:19:36
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- In article <1992Jul19.215714.18756@pellns.alleg.edu>, frisinv@pell50.alleg.edu (Vincent Frisina) writes...
-
- >
- > I am writing a fantasy novel in the third omniscient, but want to jump
- >back in time and switch to the first person in certain parts. A subplot
- >integral to understanding the main plot occurs five thousand years before
- >the story begins. Only one person fully knows what is happening and it
- >seems better told as personal reflection than as a 3rd person narrative.
- >Would this confuse the readers? I make it clear in the beginning of the
- >switch in pov that it has changed and the character is introduced in
- >passing on page one as being dead 5000 years, but I'm not sure that this
- >is enough. Thoughts?
- >---
- >Vince
-
- Actually, I am in a similar situation, although the time diference
- is only a few weeks/months. Is it possible to write the 5000 years
- earlier part as a prologue chapter? If it is handled well (as I hope
- to do with mine), it should stick in the readers mind so that they
- will remember it when you need it in the main story. In fact, the
- reader can then draw their own conclusions and "figure out" the
- connections, without it feeling quite as pre-planned.
-
- :-D ave
-