Poetry from Illinois

Poetry

This new poem is by Shanti Hubbard and was sent in by her teacher, Frada Boxer. Shanti is 13 years old and in 8th grade at Nichols Middle School, Evanston, Illinois. Can you tell what animal she is describing? You might want to draw a picture of what this poem says to YOU. Send it to us and we'll include it here.

I Stalk
By Shanti Hubbard

In a drafty old barn, I stalk
The lazy breath of the wind brings me scents as I creep around on the haystacks
I smell a mouse in the barn, but where?
I slowly walk, observing every detail;
a rusty tractor, a worn out boot, a forgotten doll. Yet I see nothing.
Then the mouse makes his fatal mistake
His tiny claws skitter on the wood
A minute sound to you, but a blast of noise to me I freeze and crouch down
low, my belly on the hay
Has he seen me? I think not
I wait.
Silence.
Then another skitter and I whip my head around
I lock my eyes on my prey, my victim
My muscles tense, as I watch the mouse and I am ready to jump.
No,not yet, I tell myself
Wait until he is under you.
But then his black eyes spot me.
He freezes, a statue of a mouse as I look into his eyes Foolish mouse.
Then he suddenly makes a run for it right under my bale of hay towards safely in a hole
But I know he will never make it
For I am quicker
I compress my body and energy and then release it,
and shoot into the air like a cannon ball,
and land heavily on the mouse I feel him wriggle under my claws his little heart racing
I am the Cat.

Back to the Write Spot!