DEEP SPACE: "Explorers" - REV. 03/13/95 - ACT THREE 33. 31 CONTINUED: (2) JAKE What did you think about the part where Jared thinks he's been betrayed? SISKO I'm not sure he'd confront Iko about it... at least not right away. JAKE Yeah... I guess he could wait until after he gets back from the Demilitarized Zone. SISKO That'd be more believable. JAKE So you really think it was good, huh? SISKO I think it shows a lot of promise. Jake's features falter, he isn't quite sure how to take this. JAKE Promise... ? SISKO In a few places you're writing about things you haven't actually experienced. At least... I hope you haven't experienced. Unless you've joined the Maquis without telling me. JAKE (poker faced) I can't talk about it... A beat as Sisko gauges Jake's face, then Jake can't hold it anymore and breaks into a smile. JAKE I had you going there... They share a smile... SISKO (re: PADD) I'm impressed, Jake, I really am... You should keep writing.